Veronica Yap:

This has an awesome illustrated storybook quality to it!

Richard Clark:

I would try different poses to break it up a bit. Both characters stay in the same pose mainly throughout. The character in blue does move more but I'm looking at the body and the body stays the same. Also, I would work on trying to keep things consistent with some of the elements in your piece. For instance, I noticed that the characters' hair grows out from the beginning to the end. And the dough continues to change shape after he stops rolling it.

David S. Rodriguez:

Started off strong but some more dynamic movements and a vitriolic reaction to being upset and then outraged when he is touched. Still, animation is still solid and I admire the effort.