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First Day

by Ronald Spooner

Final Rating: 8.15. Finished 5 out of 152 entries.

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Animator: Ronald Spooner

Description: First day on the job for a young correctional officer.

Experience: 10 Years

Time taken: 28 days, Design, builds, BG and anim

Comments:

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Genndy:

Your work is fantastic. Great animation and an awesome execution of the idea!

Ira Zagrivaya:

The art and the execution are all on point. Great job!

Richard Clark:

Really nice! I like the character designs and the staging! I would try to add some slight squash and stretch to their walkcycles to give it some more life to it. I would also like to see a slight reaction to the bump on the older character... meaning his arm being bumped should have a reaction to it. The last part, "Don't touch me" is really good!!

David S. Rodriguez:

Definitely a professional piece and worth remembering!