Genndy:

Your work is fantastic. Great animation and an awesome execution of the idea!

Ira Zagrivaya:

Such a funny animation! The timing and expressions are spot-on.

Michelle Muli:

This is an excellent animation! The composition and camera movement are very creative and provide a good context for the story. Moreover, the prop interactions add more life to the animation and make good use of the space. Concerning the character with the mask - it's great that you found a way to communicate the dialogue with the facial expressions but it would have been better if you had him put the mask on at the end when they're about to enter the door, just so that we could see the lip-syncing. The second character's dialogue also gets a bit lost when he goes to open the pot - maybe having him closer to the screen when he says his first line would help make those mouth movements clearer. Otherwise, great work!

Richard Clark:

Nice idea! I like this one!! The line where the masked character says "you're not being paid to eat..." I feel you should have used the other hand to point at the other character instead of trying to force the body turn the way you have it.

Caroline Grike:

I love how each of your characters have such defined personalities and secondary actions that help support this. Even though the one character has a mask, you can clearly see his emotions through his body language and eyes. The witty younger character has so much confidence and he seems like an annoying younger brother to the masked character. Amazing work.

David S. Rodriguez:

Good animation, but the lip sync is hard to see on the youth, but the masked robber is good.