Comments:
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ronda crom:
4 stars
Richard Clark:
It's a bit...meh. I would choose moments to really express your poses to emphasize moments and personality in the dialogue.
David S. Rodriguez:
The actions are very hard to see, but at least the drawings are solid. I recommend using color to help contrast the characters from the background, and ensuring the characters are not transparent with the background.
Animator: Angel Navarro
Description: mustachioed cowboys who are guards of an old west jal
Experience: year and a half of animation career, beginner
Time taken: 15 days