Veronica Yap:

I really love the right character's jog, finger jitters, and eyelid animation! The interpretation of the sniff was clever too. A part of myself wishes the right character could slow into the reach a teensy bit more to build more anticipation. Awesome work!

Odelys A.:

The character designs strongly fit with the story, and I appreciate how the background’s colors remain neutral for the characters and croissants to stand out. However, the some of the movements seem too dramatic, and the character on the right contains some unnecessary movements, a few which seem sharp. Reducing the actions’ dramatization and removing the minor sharp movements (like some eyebrow animations) may help in balancing the back-and-forth conversation between both characters. Nice work!

Richard Clark:

Very good!! I like what you've done here! Great staging, great personalities. This might win!

David S. Rodriguez:

Excellent!