Veronica Yap:

Solid polish on the orange character! The biggest part that confuses me is the lip sync on the very last shot where that orange character says the last bit all by themselves and also the punch at the end. Since those voices are distinct from one another, it'd be the sheriff character saying the college try portion. For the punch, you might be able to sell it more story-wise if at the middle portion you show how agitated that character is. That'll make the build up more clear!

Richard Clark:

It's a bit all over the place with your animation. Did you shoot reference? My guess...no. If you did, you need to study your movements more closely. Try not to over exaggerate so much until you understand the fundamentals better. Plus, there are 2 separate characters talking and at one point you have the one in orange speaking both parts.

David S. Rodriguez:

I am confused with who is saying the dialogue because I thought the sheriff was being berated, not Ray. Also, I do not understand adding an extra character in the mix as Ray also answers the question he posed. This is a confusing animation piece.

Shura:

I like Buff man.