Richard Clark:

Hmm...much of it looks floaty and drifting into poses. Some areas the hands pause in midair; very IKish. Lip sync needs improvement. Next time, I would recommend shooting reference of yourself doing the motion.

Odelys A.:

The renders seems sweet for the proper use of lighting, but the amount of assets appear distracting, largely for the lack of contrast with the right character. The left character’s eyes seem glossy, and both characters require additional mouth movements to emphasize the dialogue. Try adjusting the floaty animation by adding more pauses between the main poses. Finally, try synchronizing the poses to the dialogue, particularly the “don’t touch me” part. Good work!

DongHun Kim:

so goood render

David S. Rodriguez:

The animation is okay, but while Norman rig is fine the other one is not as there is no lip sync, and he does not even touch him, Norman does which makes no sense. Still, these are easy fixes.