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Double Headed Dilemma

by Ethan

Final Rating: 4.64. Finished 92 out of 152 entries.

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Animator: Ethan

Description: A two headed beast argues with itself.

Experience: I am a student in animation at NMSU and have also taken courses prior.

Time taken: Approximately a month.

Comments:

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Richard Clark:

Fun idea! Yet, it's going to be hard for one to not touch the other...haha. You have a nice drag at the beginning with the right character, but you ought to consider posing the left character with a more forceful line of action to make the drag have more sense to it. Then at frame 15 he can go back to this pose. Since you spend time on this drag, I would add this in other places like the hand coming up and down, etc. I would also try and add motion to the body to support the dialogue. It mainly just stays in one pose.

David S. Rodriguez:

This is excellent and their personalities are clear in just 258 frames. I like it!