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Richard Clark:
I like your simplistic character designs! I like that the shadow suggests the big guy walking up to him as he sits there to eat, but why do you indicate with the shadow that he walks away even when he hasn't finished talking to him and especially because of the last shot where it's apparent that he's still sitting down, using his "Reed Richards" ability to crawl up his arm and shoulder to touch him? You even have the big guy walking after that. It's a bit confusing. It would also be nice to see more of the body getting involved instead of just arm gestures.
David S. Rodriguez:
This is good, but it could be pushed more if the second, buffier character is given some more movement in the arms and torso to work with, building some more anticipation as the fourth principle of animation. Otherwise, this is an excellent animation short.
Animator: Felix Csernak
Description: When food motivates you is one thing, but getting fired for doing nothing but eating all day would worth it? Probably not...
Experience: currently learning
Time taken: around two days