Comments:
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Richard Clark:
Floaty animation mainly. Did you shoot reference? Doesn't have much weight to the characters. However, I do like the drag on the hands in certain areas!
Chrystina Woehler:
The overall movement is great, and your smear frames are especially effective! The further back character’s walk feels a bit slow compared to the closer one, which creates a slight energy mismatch. The head movements can also seem a bit floaty, with slow rotations in some spots and quick, harsh stops in others. I didn’t notice it at first, but the character in the cell looking up at them was a nice touch.
David S. Rodriguez:
Good, someone else gets the ire from Twig instead of Ray. I like it! Also, the timing is good, and we understand the personalities of these characters despite the animation being short.
Shura:
Where black hand?
Animator: Wei Sheng
Description: - Undo Student -
Try my best for the lips sync . Still can improve more .
Trying to get more experience !
Experience: 3 month
Time taken: 1 month