Richard Clark:

At first, it was a bit confusing who the talking floating face is until I saw it later at the end. I would pull the camera back to show the entire cupcake so that we know immediately who's talking. Then you can keep the extreme closeup at around frame 102. Also, considering how close the character is to camera, I would make sure the lip sync is spot on... it needs some more work. I would also try to improve on the walk in the first shot. Shoot reference next time.

David S. Rodriguez:

This made me laugh and is an awesome animation to watch. I like the creative spin of having one of the cupcakes talk. Superb work!