Richard Clark:

When the character jumps from his chair at the table around frame 34, try and get a bit of overlap in his body; have the hips react first, then the belly, then the chest, then the shoulders and finally the head. The character standing, his right arm starting at around frame 108 goes into a locked-out position. I wasn't sure if he was leaning on the table or not. Try repositioning that in a more natural (bent) pose. Lip sync needs improvement. And the feet coming up at the end seems forced into frame

David S. Rodriguez:

I like it! The movements are superb, the lip sync is on point, and the camera shakes at the end when one of them falls off the chair made me laugh.