Genndy:

Nice scene. Great animation.

Richard Clark:

Not bad! Some of your choices are a bit over-exaggerated. Like the motion with the left character when he says "Oh, give it the old college try"... this whole snake-like movement with the body is over acted. I can understand what you were going for, but it's not executed right. The sniff motion on the right character is a bit over-acted as well. I would think about a more subtle and natural approach to it. I know it's easy to not show the feet walking forward but the pacing of the movement with the hallway seems a bit slow for their walks. Overall, you have some nice stuff in here!

Muhundan Bala:

Cool!

I feel him throwing the apple is a bit weird and catches too much attention, maybe have him just putting it back into his pocket in a subtle way.

Love the don't touch me part!

David S. Rodriguez:

This is a complete animation which I would rate eleven stars across the board. Impressive work!