Comments:
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Richard Clark:
I like that you attempted characters putting on clothes! That's always a challenge. Why are there "flames" on the left character at frame 238? Maybe that's not what you're trying to convey but that's the impression I'm getting. It seems out of place. Also, the setup you have is not very interesting. It's very flat to camera. Next time I would try some more interesting angles. Try researching compositions in film.
David S. Rodriguez:
Great, but I think the character in the trench coat should have an even bigger reaction than that. Still, great work!
Animator: Yoritzy Mosqueda
Description: The captain´s trying to give advice to the new one of the crew
Experience: I just started, I´m a student
Time taken: 3 weeks