Comments:
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Richard Clark:
Nice characters! I feel the left character is posing too long with the food he is about to eat. I kept thinking he should have taken a bite out of it by now. Also, why does the left character leave frame then come back? Not sure what you're trying to convey there. The pose for him at frame 120 is not very strong. I think it's mainly the way he's holding the food with his hands. Did you shoot reference or have any reference before you started?
Muhundan Bala:
Feels a bit unfinished and could use another round on the rough animation. The movements and timing feels a bit repetitive and could use some contrast.
When he pinches his brows, make sure we read it well, right now he goes out of that gesture too fast.
David S. Rodriguez:
I think the older man should back away as he yells at him. Still, I like it.
Animator: Eclessia Armelovita
Description: An 11 second sketch animation of two of my OCs, Conrad (Big Guy) and Derek (the other guy), interacting with each other in a friendly yet "hostile" manner while having a short lunch break after a chase (they're detectives).
Experience: I've first studied animation in Highschool, and it's still ongoing as I am now in college.
Time taken: This animation took me two whole weeks.