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Richard Clark:
Ha...funny and simple. However, you're limiting your animation by hiding much of the performance with just legs walking back and forth. When you have a character moving their head like at frame 131, make sure the body also supports that... Don't animate parts in isolation. At frame 252, the direction of the (smear) frame with the arms up doesn't follow the direction of where they came from. I would expect them to be up but also be directed from the place they were hanging onto which is the leg.... so up and to the right. And also, his direction falling; instead of straight down, have it down and to the left. I do like the effect you did when the little one disappears! That's a nice touch!
David S. Rodriguez:
Good, but I think the person should do more than walk back and forth, especially when talking directly to the animal atop of hay. Still, great job!
Animator: Alif
Description: Little Lilo gets distracted by food and doesn't pay attention to farmers plan
Experience: Student
Time taken: 1 week