Richard Clark:

Your poses are good, but I would try to add more motion with the bodies when you're moving the heads and limbs of the characters in some parts. I don't see much weight in your characters as well. I would try to implement that in your animation. Maybe go back to the "bouncing ball" or "flour sack" animation exercises.

David S. Rodriguez:

The ending was funny, and I can personally relate to it. The drawing was mostly solid but with broken lines, but the characters and plot make up for it to be a great piece of animation. Great job!