Comments:
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Richard Clark:
The camera movement is too crazy. You don't need that in there. Just cut back and forth instead. Actually, I would recommend starting at the beginning with the simple bouncing ball exercise before competing.
Lorne H.:
Nice job conveying the scene. I would recommend making separate cuts between the camera changes because the movement is sporadic and makes it harder to follow the dialogue.
David S. Rodriguez:
Not ready for the competition because of the visible resolution gate and the camera doing most of the movement and it is a bit jarring. Also, the fox's eyes should follow the falling barbarian after slapping him to the ground. Neither character is expressing nor moving much.
Animator: max
Description: I hope this was better, I tried to get some better cuts.
Experience: student level
Time taken: on and off for about a week