Comments:
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Richard Clark:
When the left character pulls in the right character around frame 238, I would expect to see the right character's body have some drag to it and the left characters arm have some volume change showing the stretch of his arm grabbing him. The push at the end from the right character needs improving; his arms just stick out but no force from his body is supporting that.
David S. Rodriguez:
Superb job! This animation has everything except the characters are in what I remember being called "pencil mode" except for their beaks.
Shura:
Bwo kok kok kok *bird impression*
Animator: Sarah
Description: Still learning more and more when it comes to hand drawn animation. I can only get better from here.
Thank you for watching!
Experience: about a year and a half
Time taken: 1 month