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An adventurer’s bounty

by Abbie

Final Rating: 3.73. Finished 132 out of 152 entries.

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Animator: Abbie

Description: Fantasy based
Two adventurers in a tavern, one a newbie and the other a veteran. Audience is observing from the veteran’s point of view as he sternly tells the newbie about how the bounty job works.

Experience: A few months

Time taken: 120 hours

Comments:

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Richard Clark:

Interesting setup... I'm a bit confused as to what the story is and what is going on here. The way the character is moving his hands and arms, is he a magician or something? And why the 1 million? Is this a reward for something? It's not very clear. The push at the end was unexpected. It didn't look like the character touched him at all.

David S. Rodriguez:

Everything is too fluid. I recommend adding some rigidity and realistic movements to the arms of the characters. Everything else works and the animation is still good.