Richard Clark:

Good character designs! The hand goes right through the other characters hand when he grabs the food. What each character is doing with their hand in the last shot is a bit strange. The larger character's hand appears to go through the other character like a side wipe instead of a quick pat on the back. I think that's what you're going for since the other character on the right does a similar move to match the other (which is a great idea...btw!!). However, it's not executed perfectly. I would try to improve on that. I feel like the side swipe isn't working because the characters are too close to one another; that there isn't enough room to side swipe each other... if that makes sense?

David S. Rodriguez:

Good animation, and I feel like this is part of a larger narrative.