Comments:
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David S. Rodriguez:
The character on the left is not talking beside the Twig character in the beginning, instead he looks like he is talking to someone off-screen. The wrist of the larger character seems to be bent awkwardly and should be fixed.
Richard Clark:
I would recommend going back to the basics with a "bouncing ball" and "flour sack" animation exercises before attempting character animation.
Shura:
WHY SO SEXUAL?
Animator: Jong Zhi Yie
Description: Undo student animation .Jong Zhi Yie, Batch 032
Experience: 0
Time taken: 20 hour