Comments:
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Alexanderite Lawson:
Good job with this, I love the details of the setting! The movement of the character on the table looks very natural, the slow rise up was perfect! My main critique would just be for the other character's arms and shoulders in the beginning to look a bit less stiff, the lack of movement feels a bit off. Adding a bit more dynamic movement or showing more of the torso could be good. Good job with your animation!
Leif Hoz:
I love the premise here, this is so charming and I adore the scene! I do wish to see more exaggeration, especially in facial expressions and body movements. Specifically, when the character turns around and is scared/ shocked that his creation is actually alive, I want to see a bigger jump, more shock, maybe the hands come up-- perhaps he faints. But otherwise this is great work, good job!
Aleli:
Great staging and composition! I love the story you created with the audio as well as the characterization of the creature in the background. I think varying the human character's expression a bit more throughout the animation would add a lot to your work. Great job!
Animator: Alba Jean
Description: The protagonist tried to revive a creature and thought he had failed.
Experience: I have studied a 10 month Master's Degree in 3D animation.
Time taken: I have dedicated around 4 hours a day, 5 days a week, this month.