Comments:
(Commenting only available during the rating period)
Tim Kamara:
It looks nice
Tessa Schrock:
The bird is cute, though it's a bit distracting from the focus of the animation. This is mostly prevalent when the bird flies up to the top of the bench. The lipsync is unclear at certain moments, and I think the mouth shapes could be improved. Good work!
Alex Salas:
That bird animation is absolutely fabulous!! Very nice work on this whole animation.
Tierra:
My apologies if I'm wrong, but parts of this looks like generative AI. The bench is warping, and the lip sync and flag are too smooth compared to the body and the bird. If you used AI, I encourage you to learn to create your own work.
Animator: Tom Whiteley
Description: Entered this competition for external engagement at uni, made a lot of mistakes and wasted a lot of time but also learnt a hell of a lot making this animation.
Hope you like it.
Experience: student
Time taken: 3 weeks