Final Rating: 7.72. Finished 3 out of 130 entries.

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Animator: Anshul

Description: Al engages in a self-deprecating monologue after realizing he's been slacking off at work.

Experience: 3 years

Time taken: 2 weeks

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Alexanderite Lawson:

This looks great, the framing of the shot with the mirror makes the scene really stand out! The camera movement aids in the storytelling nicely too. I love the expressions shown and the hand being included. The eyebrow movement was very expressive. Including mirrors can be such interesting tools for making an animated project really shine, great work!

Drake Bell:

Such a great job with this piece. The story you came with is top notch and animation matches it perfectly. I really like how you are able to really convey your character's drunkenness with all the aspects of the facial animation, in both the mask and with how you slur the words on the lipsync. I also really like how you maintain the line of action in the back as he supports himself on the wall. One thing that I really would have liked to see though would have been legs as he comes in to the frame because I think that showing that drunken stumble in the legs would have been really impressive!

Tim Kamara:

Looks great!!