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More Than Dinner at Stake

by MoeTeilab

Final Rating: 5.57. Finished 45 out of 130 entries.

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Animator: MoeTeilab

Description: A burnt meal sparks more than anger in the kitchen — long-simmering tensions between husband and wife finally boil over

Experience: student 14 months

Time taken: 2-4 hours 12 days

Comments:

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Emma Soto:

Hello there! Awesome job on your submission. The level of detail you have on the male character is great. Moments like the fingers on “and what you did today” really tie the animation together. The followup with the female character’s reaction at the end is also great to show the conclusion.

Tyler Garver:

Pretty solid animation overall and I really enjoyed a lot of the smaller details such as the fingers on his hand as they slid off the table! I enjoy that your animation has a pretty clear story but I think some of the character movement choices, while executed well and smoothly, feel a lot more high energy than the audio, creating a slight disconnect.

Aleli:

Great animation! The interactions with the table are super clean and its clear that you took your time getting those down. You also did a great job delivering a clear story with such a short amount of time provided. The many gestures of the speaking character, while well-animated with clear poses, come off a bit unnatural. Other than that, great work!