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Erriana Thomas:
I think you have a solid story here. When looking at the animation, some of the lip-sync could be toned down so it doesn’t feel overanimated. There were a few moments where the mouth shapes didn’t quite match the words, but overall the lip-sync lined up with the audio very well. I also noticed the lower spine moving a bit unnaturally at times, but you did a very nice job keeping the character alive and not too stiff. Good work!
Tally Smith:
The movement is strong overall, but the left arm drifts at the end and distracts from the right hand pointing towards the door. The camera movement enhances the scene really efficiently by framing the second character briefly for context before panning away, a smart way to avoid extra animation work while also guiding the viewers eye towards the focal point.
Animator: Yash Kharadi
Description: It was a lot of fun to work on this and the audio gave me some what of a guilty vibes. So I went with something of a kill-bill aftermath scenario.
Experience: I'm just a student doing animation for around 8 months
Time taken: Around 2 weeks