Final Rating: 6.83. Finished 11 out of 130 entries.

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Animator: nikazio

Description: My first submission to 11secondclub! The characters and setting are from a video game I'm making with my friends.

Experience: Only a couple years! Still an animation student.

Time taken: About two weeks, but most of it was left until the end, haha.

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Quinn Gardner:

This came out really great! The setting is very clear and unique, and your use of the 12 principals is superb! I think the main criticism I have here is the interaction from the character on the right. I think because they look off to the distance when saying their line, its quite difficult to tell who they're referring to as "nothing." Are they angry at the character they're sitting with, or mad at the distant shark character? I suggest having the two characters reflect off each other more: have the character on the left visibly react to the one of the right, and vice versa. Overall, this is a phenomenal animation: I especially love the character designs of everyone here!