Comments:
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Tessa Schrock:
The composition is unclear because the wine bottle creates tangents, and overall blocks some key parts of the character before the bottle is picked up. I would also recommend coloring either the walls, or both of the props to something else because they tend to fade into the background and become unclear despite being key parts of the animation.








Animator: Lwanga Fredrick
Description: submission for the november challenge
Experience: 1 year
Time taken: 2 weeks