Bethany Levy:

Some nice movement in there, but I think some of the key poses are sitting on the wrong inflections in his voice.

Eva Elmo Leung:

Ending lip syncing is not present, context needs more definition; maybe a background would've been more helpful.

Owen:

I get that he's thinking the last line, but would be nice to have facial indicators like pursing lips and rolling his eyes up.

Jon Sheldon:

The first half is really interesting. I like the little head nod towards the end. The poses throughout could have had better line of action to create really nice silhouettes.

Blake Bender:

still needs lip sync

Jez:

not enough time to finish ...hmm