Comments:
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Jimmy Horner:
The lip sync is off in the beginning of the animation. Tightening it up will improve the flow of the animation. His arms seem to stretch to grab the car like Mr. Fantastic rather then a regular person.
Simon HENRY:
I think he could slow down right after he closed the drawer to accentuate the action.
Nice idea though, and the POV is wisely choosed !
Christian Greyeyes:
- comment: your lip sync is unmatched and lagging behind the audio. Our brain won't sense the character in the scene talking make it look "fake". Good luck!
Oliver Pedersen:
The forearm looks really strange on frame 100
Danny Kneip:
Really good performance from the baby.. I could hear a baby crying, though there was no audio of it! Nicely done. The lip sync needs some additional polishing. The slamming of the door with the audio cue is well done, as are the motions and gestures, in general. I'm not sure stretching the arm at F107 is working or not.. highly noticeable, but maybe not for the right reasons. I get why you did it, I wish you were able to hid the stretch, perhaps by angling the hand to hide the stretch? The camera angle is a great choice. Good job, overall.
Owen:
Good sequence of moves to ramp up the emotion. Like the man-baby expression at the end.
Yuki Radcliffe:
Not too shabby! Some of the movements seem a little too fast, though.
Animator: Matt
Description: A crazy toy collector is not impressed when he discovers his child is eating one of his antique cars!!
Experience: 5 years
Time taken: 30-40 hours