Jimmy Horner:

I think it would be better if the viewers could see his expression sometimes during the shots.

:

Aniamtion could be a bit more snappy for the man but nice work!

Will Bowe:

Animation is decent, but it's difficult to see the main character's mouth with this camera angle. Understandable that you would want to show your supporting character too, but is such a large fellow to fit in frame. Maybe if it was a dolly/pan out shot, or if it was a chest or full body shot of your main actor then cut to this shot with both characters? Not quite sure.

Dan Paris:

this was really good. I like it. Good flow.

Oliver Pedersen:

Looks decent from here but I can't really see what's going on since the camera is pretty far away and doesn't give us a good look at the man's face. Perhaps a different camera would benefit this shot

Danny Kneip:

Love that the monster is sitting there eating a car and kicking his legs like he's having the time of his life! Great bit of personality there. A pretty strong performance from the speaker - he definitely seems exasperated.