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The Chronicles of a Carless Man

by Patrick Matalavage

Final Rating: 2.75. Finished 128 out of 144 entries.

63 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Patrick Matalavage

Description: A man loses his car on a cold day.

Experience: 1 month of basic schooling

Time taken: Around 10 hours

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Warren Schutte:

What is even happening

Eva Elmo Leung:

I don't understand what is happening in this clip. I really, really don't.

Jez:

I'm not going to comment on animation but I think your colour choice is not the best. It's hard to see the characters shapes especially on the cut before last.

ibet francisco:

I'm confused whats happening. Clearer story telling needed.