Babul Prasad:

nice animation and the concept

Frankie Wright:

Interesting.

Gerrit Behnken:

i see that league of legends cinematic reference... ;)

Asween Gopinath:

Nice...

jone:

Wonderful work. congratulation

Brad Bradbury:

The jumping in the trees section is really good.
The action of the girl stealing the book is not staged well in a way that it is easy to read what just happened.

Dexter Saulisbury:

What happened to her book? :(

Bryan Hillestad:

Was this inspired by League of Legends?

Madhu Renchini:

i love this :)

Eddie Higgenbottom:

Good color tones you made it fast. Me the reader wants a little more.