Melissa:

first shot : the laser needs to open faster
second shot : the first movement is not timed with the sound
third shot : more head space and feel not natural to have his hand (without the sword) pose like this :P
Fourth shot : he is fight from backwards

Ali Asad Jafri:

I'd tweak the timing and composition of shots. Staging could be better.

ayyaps_CG_Anim:

i love the chasing butterfly part, instead of his whole body move out, you could lead with the hands move out and head & body follow . his fighting movements looks even timing, make the spacing tight for movements

Lim Hoe Kit:

Double lightsaber becomes a normal one with no transition scene? Also for the duel at around 160, it feels a bit off. While for the big guy I get why there's little antic and reaction to the fight, I feel that the scene could be pushed further by having the little guy antic his actions more to give them a sense of weight and purpose.

Raziel Gore:

Continuity error when does his flips to engage the opponent. One moment the bottom light is on, the next it's off.

Dexter Saulisbury:

Fun, nice movements.