Dave:

This is a good start, but not ready for the competition.

Ali Asad Jafri:

The animation has many issues in my view, such as timing and sense of weight. Need to polish it further.

Frankie Wright:

Didn't seem to be working with the sound well

boyko:

Complex set-up for a simpler task of basic fight. The dramatic effect needs to come from the basic principles. Shows ambition in theme selection which can be developed further.