Keith Sizemore:

The acting seems to be everywhere on this and doesn't really sell the intention of the dialogue. I would try to simplify the acting and lessen the amount of large poses you use throughout.

Dalton Krajewski:

Very well done! The body movement was very smooth and the timing gave it a lot of character and appeal. My only issue is that the mouth movements didn't synchronize with the audio very well--especially during the "Wesley Snipes" bit. Other than that timing issue, this is a very strong entry!

Yuri Marcel Vieira:

good in general, Malcolm's lip sync seems a little bit off

William Harrison:

The characters actions don't really fit the sound of the audio.

Shawshaank:

The animation looks decent but it is overacted. He does not need to do a gesture for every word. Act it out how you would normally talk to someone and find key words to accentuate.