Final Rating: 5.34. Finished 31 out of 134 entries.

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Animator: Yuri Marcel Vieira

Description: Vampires need tips on how to dress, you know, since the lack of mirrors

Experience: not enough

Time taken: some hours after work

Comments:

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J.K. Riki:

I like a lot of the expressions you have going on here! Nice work on those. Some clipping issues, and it might be nice to see the second speaker, but all in all there are some very good bits here.

Eric Heaton:

I like the business with the tie at the beginning. Overall this is a really solid test just needs a little finessing.

There is a couple parts where the character stops moving completely, You should do a "moving hold" instead so your character still seems alive. For example a very slight waist movement. This happens on frame 46, then again on 76.

The eye roll happens too soon and is too slow and even. He should stop to listen to the off screen character then react.

The secondary action of the arms tying the tie at the beginning is very staccato. Consider adding more slow in and slow out

Pink:

Nice work! Your character really acts through his emotion. Him fiddling with his tie is also a nice touch. I do feel like its lacking a little bit because there's only one character on the screen. I also kind of feel like he starts his eye roll a little bit too early when the other voice starts to argue about his costume. Overall it's pretty good though, keep up the good work!

Dalton Krajewski:

Great acting choices!

Bhuvnesh kumar:

Nice Expression.. just need to improvise in posing.