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J.K. Riki:
It's a start! You may want to focus more on the rough animation before putting color and details in. Right now it needs more attention in the actual movement department. Work rough, then add clean lines on top once everything is smooth and beautiful in rough form. Good luck with future entries! Keep at it.
Pink:
Nice work! You did a good job in making sure the characters were moving while talking instead of being completely still. I think this would be a lot stronger if both characters were both on the screen at the same time instead of one only appearing while they talk and disappearing when they don't. I'm not quite sure what animation program you're using, but I would recommend using different layers while animating! Keep on practicing!!
Animator: Grace Ault
Description: Two children are auditioning for a part in the school play.
Experience: student
Time taken: 2 weeks