Cedric Le Poullennec:

Nice but calm down with stretch in the head

Jez:

Looking good

Laurent Châtellier:

Nice technique and strong poses. Very snappy, but I think it's too much changes in the poses for the white guy. I think it doesn't match this character's voice wich is cool and calm.
Also, maybe you don't need to be so literal with the word "hunter", we all know what a hunter is, doing the gestures of the rifle and all seams over the top.