Virgilio Vasconcelos:

Interesting, but the camera movement was somewhat distracting.

Simon Vergereau:

Good drawing skills! I think it's over-gesticulating at the begining, the second shot is much more readable =)

J.K. Riki:

Nicely done! The start feels like it might be moving a bit too much, as it's hard to let the eyes focus on the character. Just a bit more time to get your bearings would be helpful. All in all, though, excellent work.

mowanie:

Cool designs, keep it up!