Mackenzie:

The pattern lighting is a nice touch, though I would try to tone it down some to not distract from your characters. The poses on the first character on the left are nice when he's exploring. The character on the right looks too stiff and slow, and his steps are very small.

Conway Dobbs:

light makes it hard to watch and the key poses are off

Wes:

I like the idea, the lip sync is a bit off especially at the end and I think its too much with the moving light, its distracting.

Owen Doud:

Lighting is very distracting.