Comments:
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Mackenzie:
The shots are a little confusing, not completely sure what all is going on in the scene. I would change the angle on the second character and not zoom in on his elbows. The flashing lights are an interesting idea, but should be toned down and limited, they are distracting from your character's motion and expressions.
Conway Dobbs:
hand all over the place and the lights are distorting
Wes:
Movements need more work , could be more fluid and I am not entirely sure what the story is here?
Animator: Damar Arini Nurraina
Description: Doing for assessment~
Experience: less than 2 years
Time taken: almost 1 month but not everyday i made it lol