Mackenzie:

Character moves rigidly, especially the hands where the fingers don't appear the be animated at all. The lip sync is also a little off. Works well for animation practice, but still needs improvement,

Conway Dobbs:

so slow at the start. shoulders are not natural and need more movement in the body. Remember all movement comes from the core. Even the smallest of movements.

talha bin khalid:

Dialogue should be "you could smell the poo coming from the walls in here, yeah isn't that wonderful, not when the poo stinks" sorry couldn't help. Please work on basics.