Comments:
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Mackenzie:
Camera switching to reveal second character is very fast. Second character appears to barely move at all aside from his arm and face. The first character is better, but still a little stiff.
Conway Dobbs:
nice but needs work
John Vargas:
two suggestions, if I may. When the character says "pleasant" , it sounds like he is hesitant with a hint of fear, in my opinion. What if you emphasized your character's emotion when he says the word? I feel like you have the right track when the character says "not when the history fights back." it just needs to be slightly reinforced. Perhaps a slightly faster head movement? again, just a suggestion and my opinions. Overall, I think you did good work!
Animator: Christabella
Description: A conversation between Ryan and Daniel in an old building.
Experience: few months
Time taken: about a week