Comments:
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Vedanth Panchoo:
I think you may want to find a way to show that they are different people next time. Maybe give the one Max a hat or change the material colour of their body to give them "clothes".
Aidan Stokes:
effort - 0
lip sync - 0
animation principals applied - 0
Tigran:
lip sync needs work hes not mouthing words hes basicly moving his mouth up and down in the same one movment, also where is he? a background can give a lot of context to a story and why is he speaking for 2 seprate people?
Kieran Mann:
Good, but maybe add another character rig for the second character voice.
Animator: Oscar Megan
Description: Simple animation that forms part of a draft, that will be used for college.
Experience: Very little, I am a student.
Time taken: Just over a day.