Eilin Berrio:

Fun story, maybe second character looks at first character a bit earlier to maintain eye contact between characters.

Robert Cartwright:

that last frame tho

Harry:

I like the poses you got in this piece they tell a great story. I think you could improve your arcs on some of the big movements, overall nice piece.

Elisabeth Janerka:

Good potential in animation, but the setup is super unclear

Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto:

For the most part, the animation is very good, and I like the story. Just need to slow down the speed of some pose and camera transitions.