Final Rating: 4.02. Finished 105 out of 182 entries.

288 views including the voting period.


Animator: Rob Melvin

Description: Work in Progress, Needs to be re-done, coloured, given a background etc.

First time trying this.

Eventually the two characters will be sitting on a train having a conversation, which is why the larger one turns his head (looking out the window).

Experience: Not much, I'm a student.

Time taken: A day to draw and a day to animate.


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the slight head bob on the right character as he pauses seems strange

C h o c o b i l l y :

This reminds me of "He-Man and the Masters of the Universe". Cool ~

Drew Doniger:

cool character designs

Elisabeth Janerka:

Maybe go for just slightly less detailed characters, so you actually can focus on the animation

Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto:

The inbetweens, especially on the larger character, need a lot more work.