Comments:
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Charlton:
the slight head bob on the right character as he pauses seems strange
C h o c o b i l l y :
This reminds me of "He-Man and the Masters of the Universe". Cool ~
Drew Doniger:
cool character designs
Elisabeth Janerka:
Maybe go for just slightly less detailed characters, so you actually can focus on the animation
Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto:
The inbetweens, especially on the larger character, need a lot more work.
Animator: Rob Melvin
Description: Work in Progress, Needs to be re-done, coloured, given a background etc.
First time trying this.
Eventually the two characters will be sitting on a train having a conversation, which is why the larger one turns his head (looking out the window).
Experience: Not much, I'm a student.
Time taken: A day to draw and a day to animate.