Comments:
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Elisabeth Janerka:
Go over Malcolm' eyes again. Right now he is looking in two different directions
Robert Cartwright:
the motions are pretty twitchy, probably on part because of too many keyframes. Try to limit them to make it flow better. Good work!
Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto:
The animation is jumpy on the first character and flat on the second, and the lipsync is poor on the laughs
Animator: Julianne Farmer
Description: Two "frenemies" have a conversation about their past life choices...been aiming to practice with Maya more often, bit shabby but I hope you enjoy it! Please feel free to critique away!
Experience: Student Animator
Time taken: 4-5 days on and off