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The freaky spicy negotiation

by Guru Moorthi R

Final Rating: 3.39. Finished 137 out of 182 entries.

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Animator: Guru Moorthi R

Description: Animal is the Victim and the Human is enquiring

Experience: I've done a semester (4 months) in Animation during my Bachelor Degree

Time taken: 5-7 days(on average)

Comments:

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Robert Cartwright:

the motion seems a little like slo-motion in parts, which is a little strange seeing that both characters are still speaking in 1:1 speed. Maybe try to smooth some of the motion a bit. Love the emotion on their faces though! Great work!

Elisabeth Janerka:

Really unclear what exactly is happening.... Maybe go for something a bit more simple next time

Gabriel Mira de Assumpção Peixoto:

Everything's too jumpy, and the object interactions need work. And what's that light that keeps dancing on the screen?